cat at the beach

WALT: narrate a story that involves a cat, at the beach and a friend needs help
It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.  

“Why the long face?” Johnson said Bryon replied because when” I was eating my fish a dog scared me so I ran in terror and my owners were mad they said “its just a dog” then Byron replied no.

Then johnson said “do you want to play a game” said johnson bryon replied “sure what game” said bryon johnson replied “hide and seek.”

So they played hide and seek till they where tired then johnson said “wow that was fun”said johnson.  when the owener  of johnson  since johnsons owner went back he was wet so the johnson and bryon walked one step back. when johnsons owener dryed himself he got two fishs for me and  byron. So we eat fish and had a awesome day.

                                                         the end

 

writing test

sudden desapearnces

It was a normal day antil the aliens came they were stealing everything from the world even people

nobody was safe .

til people made the robots called alametronics. They created them to hunt down the aliens but when they saw them they turned aginst everybody enclueding humans so then they haunted houses and places so when the aliens came back they were mad.

“freddy said the aliens wont be able to get inside here” said Freddy. Bonnie said “ya but we need wepons” said Bonnie. Then they upgraded them selfs then the aliens came and said “you belong to us” said they aliens The alametronics said “no we dont” they had a war with each other then the alametronics said “we have to get to the house” they said.

When they went to the house they were asking there friend the nightmare alametronics if they could help they said yes then stayed there there  where a few of them so they were strong.

fredbear said “we need to stay here” fredbear said  then nightmare said “we,ve got some baracades so do we” said the alametronics.

Then the aliens where planing there attacks then they were stealing them one at a time even the alametronics got sucked up by there ufos so they set up a back hole to destroy everything even time so the aliens called it the heart of darkness. but before that the alametronics entered there game thing stared to desapear and glitch out then the video games where mearged together.

So minecraft and fnaf got mearged togther so endermen began to steal blocks crepears blew stuff up and things even ufos. But then the aliens got mad they got the other armies then lanched the heart of darkness when it was lanched then aliens ran to anther galexy to do there own thing so the aliens won the war and left everything destroyed even time.

                                                                         the end

Dictagloss

the strange desapearences
 

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

“Something strange was happening  one by one things despairing first my mom then my dad and now my sister were all gone”. “it was my job to find out these sudden strange desapearnces.”


my score out of 10 is 6

useing more that one stratigy

1 tidy numbers
 28 +34 =
28 + 2 = 30
32 + 30 = 62
place value
20 + 30 = 50
8 + 2 = 10
50 + 10 = 60
60 + 2 = 62
2
place value
37 + 44 =
30 + 40 = 70
4 + 7 = 11
70 + 11 = 81
tidy numbers
37 + 44 =
37 + 3 = 40
41 + 40 = 81
3
place value
85 - 39 =
30 - 80 = 50
55 - 9 = 46
tidy numbers
85 - 38 =
85 - 5 = 80
30 - 80 = 50
8 - 50 = 42

Maxs camping trip

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

                Maxs camping trip.

Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling “how could you forget the food?” to which the mother replied ,“it was a honest mistake im sure someone will help us”.      

my score out of 14 is 9

Te Waka o Aoraki: How the South Island was formed

this story was very intursting to read and write so the four brothers were hungry so they went to earth and fish. When they got nothing they wanted to go back so the fourth brother chanted to it . then when the brothers cyed the foruth brother got destracted and the waka fell down then sinked then the brothers turned to mountions. then turned to the south island

1. What had Aoraki and his brothers set out to do? go to earth to fish
2. Explain why was Aoraki distracted while he was chanting his karakia? to get back up in space
3. Which part of the canoe was stuck in the ocean and which part launched into space? the stern the bow
4. Why couldn’t they return back to the sky? the chant was broken
5. Explain why the brothers turned to stone the magic of the broken waka turned them to stone
6. Where are Aoraki and his brothers now? in the south island

volcanoes in auckland

here is my post about there Auckland volcanoes.

narrative writing 2016

One day there was a boy named Ben who went with his family to camp for his birthday. So he went to the forest to celebrate his birthday in the woods.

Ben went around in the woods to explore  and he saw a bear. it was eating salmon which  meant it was “very” hungry.suddeny  he saw a swarm of wasps heading towards him. Ben found a cave and he went in and it was very dark. He heard a loud voice  saying “get out of my property”he started to   shivered “who said that?” he wored

The voice  showed itself it was a zombie. quickly Ben ran out to his family and yelled“we have to get out of here”!!!!!! So they packed everything quickly and drove away.                                         The end

crocodile creche

I learned about saltwater crocodiles are very aggressive and I learned what they do WALT: Gather information about saltwater crocodiles and present it on our blogs

three little pigs

Walt: Describe characters from the Three Little Pigs

The three little pigs

the there little pigs First Little Pig

Walt: Describe characters from the Three Little Pigs

here are a few words to describe the there little pigs

Algebra Patterns with numbers

                                                     Number Patterns

Walt: Recognise and identify simple number patterns

a). 9, 14, 19,24, 29,34, 39

b). 7, 13, 19, 25, 31, 3,43

c). 11, 21, 31, 41, 51, 61, 71

d). 6, 14, 22, 30,38 ,44 ,52

e). 12, 15, 18,21 ,24 ,27 ,30

f). 2, 4, 8, 16,32 ,64 ,128 ,256

g). 3, 33, 63, 93, 123, 153, 183

h). 50, 100, 150, 200, 250, 300, 350

i).  11, 22, 33,44 ,55 ,66 ,77

j). 18, 36, 54,72 ,90 ,118 ,126

kiwi fruit reading

WALT: Find out more information and share three facts about Kiwifruit in New Zealand

Using the information above to find the answers to these questions:

1. What is another name for kiwifruit? gooseberry

2. What shape are kiwifruit?  ovil

3. What’s inside the kiwifruit?  editable

4. What does a kiwifruit taste like? sweet

5. Why did the change the name to kiwifruit in 1959? back to kiwi fruit

algebra patterns

hi my names Ben and ive been learning about the algebra patterns and numbers with shapes and calars check out my work

all about me 2016

hi my name is Ben and a I am a year 6 student at pt England school. Also I am ten. Also my favourite food is McDonald's Also my favourite movie is star wars episode 7 the force awakens. my favourite song is the imperial march. Also my favourite sport is swimming. that is about me today hope you enjoyed thanks for reading.

about me 2016

WALT im going to share new information about me for 2016
hi my names Ben hope you enjoy my presentation. about me for 2016