Zack the dragon and his fun game

once upon there was a dragon named Zack he was playing in the forest with his brother when another dragon “came along what are you two doing” he asked “we’re playing knights” they replied “do you want to play to.”



when the other dragon said “sure” Zack and his brother said “whats your name” said Zack and his brother said ghe replied “my name is brad” brad said so how do we play said brad he said zack replied you have to attack a castle and get the king Said Zack his brother also said to “get your brothers and sisters to help in this game”. Said Zacks brother When they got in place they attacked the kingdom and the people were in terror. The king said to his knights to protect his kingdom the knight failed Zack got the king then left his brother Said” well done Zack” Said his brother. Brad Said “that was A fun game Zack” Said brad. The king Said in terror “let me down please” said the king Zack let him down and left the game was over and they went back home and told his family and had a happy ending.

Year 5 & 6 camp presntation

Maxs camping trip

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

                Maxs camping trip.

Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling “how could you forget the food?” to which the mother replied ,“it was a honest mistake im sure someone will help us”.      

my score out of 14 is 9

narrative writing 2016

One day there was a boy named Ben who went with his family to camp for his birthday. So he went to the forest to celebrate his birthday in the woods.

Ben went around in the woods to explore  and he saw a bear. it was eating salmon which  meant it was “very” hungry.suddeny  he saw a swarm of wasps heading towards him. Ben found a cave and he went in and it was very dark. He heard a loud voice  saying “get out of my property”he started to   shivered “who said that?” he wored

The voice  showed itself it was a zombie. quickly Ben ran out to his family and yelled“we have to get out of here”!!!!!! So they packed everything quickly and drove away.                                         The end