Monday, 22 February 2016

Maxs camping trip

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word


                Maxs camping trip.

Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling “how could you forget the food?” to which the mother replied ,“it was a honest mistake im sure someone will help us”.      

 my score out of 14 is 9
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  1. Lehi22 February 2016 at 11:39

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  2. Samantha22 February 2016 at 11:40

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  3. Samantha22 February 2016 at 11:43

    what got work Ben I like your work Ben.

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  4. Unknown22 February 2016 at 15:44

    Good effort Ben at listening, spelling and punctuating the paragraph that was dictated to you.

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