Thursday, 24 September 2015

Ben smart emails

we were learning about smart emails for the last day of the school for  term  3.

Thursday, 17 September 2015

the crocodile Short Paragraphs

In the picture I saw this calm person out of nowhere  there was this terrifying dangerous and famous crocodile with this strong guy on a boat and he didn't look scared Also I think that was his pet.

the bull chase Short Paragraphs

Once there was a man he was diving down in the ocean and then there was A furious  and terrifying bull! the man looked was shocked And the people looked surprised and frightened.Also the fearless bull leaped

Tuesday, 15 September 2015

my writing my rubric

once we had cross country  on the 7th of september it was one of the most hardest things that i've ever done also cross country is when our school runs far far away and back to get fit and we were really tired.  We started at 1.00 o'clock also when we were spectating we sore everybody trying there best at cross country.

  Also when we started when Mr burt smashed the wood together I needed time to think then once he smashed it together when we started I was using all my energy it was really hard but I made it and I was really tired  and I didn't believe it was hard.  Than I thought.

When we started it wasn't like last year  it was more difficult than I fort  it was one of hardest things i've done also i felt very tired through nearly all of it and half way i had a stitch and i was really sore like i was bitten by a spider sore. also once I went to the finish line I felt happy.That it was over and I had a nice drink of water it was refreshing.

and what came I came 3rd to last at least I wasn't last and one of my friends came first and most of friends came difrent places like 2nd 3rd 4th 5th 6th and other places and it was good that I wasn't last also when the year 5s and me ran and it was really difficult. Also I was running as fast as I could and I beat two people on the run.    Also lots of people waged it and  they said excuses like I will die from it cross country Also cross country is the best in  The world .  

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