Monday, 22 February 2016

Maxs camping trip

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word


                Maxs camping trip.

Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling “how could you forget the food?” to which the mother replied ,“it was a honest mistake im sure someone will help us”.      

my score out of 14 is 9

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    1. Hi Ben I like your work because it has a lot off spichmarks

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  3. what got work Ben I like your work Ben.

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  4. Good effort Ben at listening, spelling and punctuating the paragraph that was dictated to you.

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