Friday 18 March 2016

pirate writing

Once upon a time there was a pirate named Dredbeared. He had a robotic arm and a gun holstered to his hip dredbeared was a very menacing. His outfit was dark as night, his ship was light as day but his crew was very hard to come over. His hearty crew names were Chris Gary Matt Tom and Edd. They were all men because men are tough not like girls.





When their ship crashed the crew was scared and dred beared was alone. He went out to find his crew and find booty in the island “YARR! Where Be Me” Crew Dred beard said suddenly he found a swarm of spiders and a giant spider queen that was going to eat him. So he got his gun and shot the spiders and nothing happened “WHAT BE DIS”! said Dred beard . then he found one of his crew it was Tom. So he tried to shoot it with his gun it fell of and popped then black beared said “get up scallywag!” then Tom got out his gun then tried to shoot the spiders.



When it did nothing dredbeard yelled “JUMP!!!!!!” Tom and dredbeard jumped down the waterfall to run away from the spiders. When they fell down they almost died. They saw another one of their crew it was edd. Both dredbeard and tom shot at the bubble then it popped and edd got out his sword and followed Tom and dredbeard to a find the rest of the crew.


While they were walking around, they saw a couple of spiders that were heading right towards them us so they decided to ran. then they got ambushed by the spider. Dred beard said “YARR WE BE DOOMED!.”  Tom said  eye caption it was with you” Tom said dred beard had an idea he said “Tom you shot the ones on the edd chop the ones on the right I will have the middle lets go” commanded dredbeard.

 





When they were looking  for matt Chris and gary but they couldn’t find them they were trying to fix the ship but they think they got eaten by the spiders. When they fixed the ship before they went off to the pirate island tom saw an x and said captain there an x marked here. Dredbeard said well dig it. When Tom and Edd started digging then they saw a giant chest  dredbeard said “YARR BRING THEY BUTTY ON ME SHIP” said dredbeard . When Tom and Edd brought the treasure on the ship dredbeard said “YARR SET SAIL TO THE SEA” said dredbeard
When went to sea they got what they wanted and in the chest was 900,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 gold. Dredberd said “YARR WE BE RICH” dredbeard said then they made to sea they got new people called  kaden vill and simon in there crew and had a happy ending after that  adventure.       

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