dictagloss

"This term our topic is called as I see It. Our team is focusing on comic art with pictures and small box's   that tell the story in sequential order some times there are words, diolog and onomatopoeia other times there only pictures can guess what I'm saying".

pirate writing

Once upon a time there was a pirate named Dredbeared. He had a robotic arm and a gun holstered to his hip dredbeared was a very menacing. His outfit was dark as night, his ship was light as day but his crew was very hard to come over. His hearty crew names were Chris Gary Matt Tom and Edd. They were all men because men are tough not like girls.

When their ship crashed the crew was scared and dred beared was alone. He went out to find his crew and find booty in the island “YARR! Where Be Me” Crew Dred beard said suddenly he found a swarm of spiders and a giant spider queen that was going to eat him. So he got his gun and shot the spiders and nothing happened “WHAT BE DIS”! said Dred beard . then he found one of his crew it was Tom. So he tried to shoot it with his gun it fell of and popped then black beared said “get up scallywag!” then Tom got out his gun then tried to shoot the spiders.

When it did nothing dredbeard yelled “JUMP!!!!!!” Tom and dredbeard jumped down the waterfall to run away from the spiders. When they fell down they almost died. They saw another one of their crew it was edd. Both dredbeard and tom shot at the bubble then it popped and edd got out his sword and followed Tom and dredbeard to a find the rest of the crew.

While they were walking around, they saw a couple of spiders that were heading right towards them us so they decided to ran. then they got ambushed by the spider. Dred beard said “YARR WE BE DOOMED!.”  Tom said  eye caption it was with you” Tom said dred beard had an idea he said “Tom you shot the ones on the edd chop the ones on the right I will have the middle lets go” commanded dredbeard.

 

When they were looking  for matt Chris and gary but they couldn’t find them they were trying to fix the ship but they think they got eaten by the spiders. When they fixed the ship before they went off to the pirate island tom saw an x and said captain there an x marked here. Dredbeard said well dig it. When Tom and Edd started digging then they saw a giant chest  dredbeard said “YARR BRING THEY BUTTY ON ME SHIP” said dredbeard . When Tom and Edd brought the treasure on the ship dredbeard said “YARR SET SAIL TO THE SEA” said dredbeard

When went to sea they got what they wanted and in the chest was 900,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 gold. Dredberd said “YARR WE BE RICH” dredbeard said then they made to sea they got new people called  kaden vill and simon in there crew and had a happy ending after that  adventure.       

Captin Morgan Adams

Captain Morgan Adams
Captain Morgan Adams was a tyrant a pirate bent on causing mayhem and havic. Across  the seven seas but also the enemey of the britsh empire. Along with his crew  they had boarded smaller ships and taking there butty for the keeping .This all chaged when they came across the cursed treasure of davy jones locker

My score out of 17 is 4

Zack the dragon

Zack the dragon

Zack was estactic and also curies what was knight in shiny armour doing in the middle of the forest let alone wanted to play with dragons. Didn't he know they meant to be enimes after all?. Surely he was up to something and it was up zacks to find out this knights outearer motive.

my score is out of 15 is 5

cat at the beach

WALT: narrate a story that involves a cat, at the beach and a friend needs help
It was a beautiful sunny day to spend at the beach. Johnson the cat was relaxing on the hot white sand. His master was paddling in the refreshing crystal water, when suddenly his friend Byron came along. He was looking very sorry for himself.  

“Why the long face?” Johnson said Bryon replied because when” I was eating my fish a dog scared me so I ran in terror and my owners were mad they said “its just a dog” then Byron replied no.

Then johnson said “do you want to play a game” said johnson bryon replied “sure what game” said bryon johnson replied “hide and seek.”

So they played hide and seek till they where tired then johnson said “wow that was fun”said johnson.  when the owener  of johnson  since johnsons owner went back he was wet so the johnson and bryon walked one step back. when johnsons owener dryed himself he got two fishs for me and  byron. So we eat fish and had a awesome day.

                                                         the end

 

writing test

sudden desapearnces

It was a normal day antil the aliens came they were stealing everything from the world even people

nobody was safe .

til people made the robots called alametronics. They created them to hunt down the aliens but when they saw them they turned aginst everybody enclueding humans so then they haunted houses and places so when the aliens came back they were mad.

“freddy said the aliens wont be able to get inside here” said Freddy. Bonnie said “ya but we need wepons” said Bonnie. Then they upgraded them selfs then the aliens came and said “you belong to us” said they aliens The alametronics said “no we dont” they had a war with each other then the alametronics said “we have to get to the house” they said.

When they went to the house they were asking there friend the nightmare alametronics if they could help they said yes then stayed there there  where a few of them so they were strong.

fredbear said “we need to stay here” fredbear said  then nightmare said “we,ve got some baracades so do we” said the alametronics.

Then the aliens where planing there attacks then they were stealing them one at a time even the alametronics got sucked up by there ufos so they set up a back hole to destroy everything even time so the aliens called it the heart of darkness. but before that the alametronics entered there game thing stared to desapear and glitch out then the video games where mearged together.

So minecraft and fnaf got mearged togther so endermen began to steal blocks crepears blew stuff up and things even ufos. But then the aliens got mad they got the other armies then lanched the heart of darkness when it was lanched then aliens ran to anther galexy to do there own thing so the aliens won the war and left everything destroyed even time.

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Dictagloss

the strange desapearences
 

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

“Something strange was happening  one by one things despairing first my mom then my dad and now my sister were all gone”. “it was my job to find out these sudden strange desapearnces.”


my score out of 10 is 6

all about me 2016

hi my name is Ben and a I am a year 6 student at pt England school. Also I am ten. Also my favourite food is McDonald's Also my favourite movie is star wars episode 7 the force awakens. my favourite song is the imperial march. Also my favourite sport is swimming. that is about me today hope you enjoyed thanks for reading.

about me 2016

WALT im going to share new information about me for 2016
hi my names Ben hope you enjoy my presentation. about me for 2016