Dictagloss

the strange desapearences
 

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

“Something strange was happening  one by one things despairing first my mom then my dad and now my sister were all gone”. “it was my job to find out these sudden strange desapearnces.”


my score out of 10 is 6

useing more that one stratigy

1 tidy numbers
 28 +34 =
28 + 2 = 30
32 + 30 = 62
place value
20 + 30 = 50
8 + 2 = 10
50 + 10 = 60
60 + 2 = 62
2
place value
37 + 44 =
30 + 40 = 70
4 + 7 = 11
70 + 11 = 81
tidy numbers
37 + 44 =
37 + 3 = 40
41 + 40 = 81
3
place value
85 - 39 =
30 - 80 = 50
55 - 9 = 46
tidy numbers
85 - 38 =
85 - 5 = 80
30 - 80 = 50
8 - 50 = 42

Maxs camping trip

WALT: Write what is being dictated to us, word for word

                Maxs camping trip.

Max could see from a distance a family that were at each other's throats. The father was yelling “how could you forget the food?” to which the mother replied ,“it was a honest mistake im sure someone will help us”.      

my score out of 14 is 9

Te Waka o Aoraki: How the South Island was formed

this story was very intursting to read and write so the four brothers were hungry so they went to earth and fish. When they got nothing they wanted to go back so the fourth brother chanted to it . then when the brothers cyed the foruth brother got destracted and the waka fell down then sinked then the brothers turned to mountions. then turned to the south island

1. What had Aoraki and his brothers set out to do? go to earth to fish
2. Explain why was Aoraki distracted while he was chanting his karakia? to get back up in space
3. Which part of the canoe was stuck in the ocean and which part launched into space? the stern the bow
4. Why couldn’t they return back to the sky? the chant was broken
5. Explain why the brothers turned to stone the magic of the broken waka turned them to stone
6. Where are Aoraki and his brothers now? in the south island

volcanoes in auckland

here is my post about there Auckland volcanoes.

narrative writing 2016

One day there was a boy named Ben who went with his family to camp for his birthday. So he went to the forest to celebrate his birthday in the woods.

Ben went around in the woods to explore  and he saw a bear. it was eating salmon which  meant it was “very” hungry.suddeny  he saw a swarm of wasps heading towards him. Ben found a cave and he went in and it was very dark. He heard a loud voice  saying “get out of my property”he started to   shivered “who said that?” he wored

The voice  showed itself it was a zombie. quickly Ben ran out to his family and yelled“we have to get out of here”!!!!!! So they packed everything quickly and drove away.                                         The end

crocodile creche

I learned about saltwater crocodiles are very aggressive and I learned what they do WALT: Gather information about saltwater crocodiles and present it on our blogs